Sprite Stitch Board!

I was wondering if someone could try converting this into a cross stich pattern. No bigger than 8 x 10 please.

Here's a preview of what it looks like resized, let know what you think, some of the detail has been lost in the face:

Is it possible to get any more detail or would the pattern have to be bigger to do that?

Other than drawing in the extra detail by hand, the only other ways to increase the detail are to increase the size of the pattern, which would mean a bigger frame, or increase the count of the fabric, which would mean more stitches in the same area. The last picture was an 8x10 inch picture using 18 count fabric.